Choice 1 :rail lives ( real life)
Before I start explaining anything, I must say the tutorial was really a tough one. It nearly killed all my brain cells. So, what's realism can be a form of expressionism, or formalism, and it all depends on your view on each pictures. Oh well, out of the tons of wonderful pictures we reviewed today, I am very impressed with the Snail picture done by Jillyn. Simple, intriguing and nicely frame. My picture, on the other hand, did not have a strong concept. sigh~ i was in total disappointment. haha. But thank god.. Karen save me! She helped me to place my shots, and I finally got a set of nicely fitted shots for Realism, Formalism and Expressionism. She came out with the little boy, who lost his way in life... and finally, did he find the path in life, the destination that he yearn to go.
Realism
As literal as the shot can be, I give it a realistic snapshot. I want my viewer to be able to see what I was seeing ( or put it in another manner; what i want them to see), in this realistic picture. It shows a long stretch of track, as in the 'REAL WAY' tracks of life. It is a wide shot, and it tells you what I am shooting - a rail way track.
Formalism
This shot was done at a very low angle, capturing a limited view of the track. I want to portray the path in life, where the chains markts the different transitions in life, the stones' the obstacles and the 'no finishing line' track represent the uncertainty in life. I change the contrast a little, to a little rusty reddish look, because red represents life too. If this picture is to stand along, it might take a while for viewers ( though not very long) to see what that picture is all about. It's a little abstract, and the rough rusty texture just gives off this creepy feeling. In addition, the angle of the shots gives off the feeling that an individual ( like what karen has mention, a little boy searching for light in life), as he is trying to creep off this stretch of uncertainty, and explore a whole near experience in life.
Expressionism
Mr Reddy mention that my concept's not clear, and that is why, I'm confuse myself. I wanted to portray modernity vs tradition. But he said that the train itself is actually a modern transport, which is true.
Hence, I thought of the path in life and I thought my pictures can portray that.I want to express this then, that in one's life, we usually have to make many decision in life that will bring us to the different routes in life. , in the midst of the 'real life', where the individual is searching ( since he is lost), he manage to find an alternative in life at the junction of the railway, and set to search ( creep - look for ) a better path in life.
Decipher this: I name this picture ' rail life' because i see the tracks as life, and it just brings us onto a trip in life round the world, where, we search for new entities in life. There might be obstacles, there might be challenges, or even lost ( like what karen has mention )but we still need to have the courage to move on the tracks and learn about our future - explore. And at times when we are lucky or we meet certain junctions in life, we have a new alternative, a new form of 'transportation'( car to railway train
Self-assessment /choice 2 ( 87/ 100) : Aesthetic 18, Concept 17, Creativity 16 Effort 18,Technique 18
Alright, I shall compare my artwork with the snails pictures. I think I seriously lose out to her in terms of both the concept and creativity. I will give Jillyn's work 92/100, because I think her shots are intriguing... simple yet creative. It speaks volume, and in a certain way, it puts one in pensive mode actually. I like Ivy's one too, but perhaps because i don't really appreciate abstract art, i took me a while after she presented, that i realise, 'hey, it's a good piece of artwork!' I will give her 90/100 for the concept she has. How the triangle works, how oppression behind those bars speaks about the fear of that MR TAN creeping through those bars to escape from the loan shark. haha. That's very nice!
As for my pictures, I like the way i talk about life. I always have this intriguing thought about life. Often, i love to wallow in 'sorrows' about life, its therapeutic.Hence, i like the way i potray life as railway tracks ' real life', and how, at the different junctions in life, that we decided to take an alternative path which might bring us to the different destination i life.
Choice 2 : defeat oh victory
**( it's just an extra shot, but i would prefer to hand in the first choice.)
Realism
As literal as the shot can be, this shot is a straightforward transparent view when i first enter the place, taking the picture from the sides. It gives the viewers 'my point of view' at that time, that all i see was a stretch of tombs.
Formalism
I did this shot with a poppy on top of the engraved tombstone.It shows the names engraved on the wall, and the engraving leads you on to the red poppy flower, which is glowing and attracts a certain attention.
Red symbolizes love and danger, which at the same time, fits the story behind all these brave souls. They fought a dangerous battle for their love ones, and now, the only thing that is left, is their spirit in us, and the love for all mankind.
Expressionism
9 represents danger and urgency, and here, the tombstone that i decided to take was number 9. It just reflects how the india army had to risk their lives then to save the country. I decided to focus only on the engravings and took off all the plants that were blocking the shots. I wanted to portray serenity...hm..but yet, with hints of mellowness in the picture - as though it allows viewers to reflect on their lives and for a moment in time, wallow in sorrow.
My emotion for mankind who have fought the war is strong. That's why I've always long to be a war photographer, and how, that perhaps the price of such passion, is that it leads to a deep engraving in one's live.
Decipher this : I love the Kranji war memorial, and oh wells, i didn't choose a graveyard because it's creepy. It's actually a nice place to shoot during the golden hours. ( it was raining that day, so well...) anyway, in my perspective, creep has another meaning, it meant 'defeated'. Yes, the picture itself is self-explanatory,a defeated war. Yet, I feel, ( another meaning for creep - reach) out to people out there, that the sacrifices made by man was worth
I love this set of pictures, and i think it leads on to another of Shakespeare's play - Macbeth.
"To-morrow, and to-morrow, and to-morrow,
Creeps in this petty pace from day to day,
To the last syllable of recorded time;
And all our yesterdays have lighted fools
The way to dusty death. Out, out, brief candle!
Life's but a walking shadow; a poor player,
That struts and frets his hour upon the stage,
And then is heard no more: it is a tale..."